Fanon talk:The Case of the Gunshot Wounds/@comment-4083965-20110902032850

Great job, DanPin. I know I'm a little late to comment, but I can honestly say - I was hooked. I really love what you did with the story; it was funny at times, but also very sad. While the writing style could have been better, it was very easy to understand and was very interesting. The epilogue makes me feel happy for little Charlie, and this story made me wish Clone Childs aren't illegal. Overall, you did an excellent job at having readers fall in love with your story and successfully wrote a mystery story (success being that all the evidence supports the final verdict and had several potential suspects). Kudos to you ^_^