Fanon talk:Zombie Apocalypse: Dangerous Journey/@comment-26516917-20150829001857

The english is impeccable! That makes the reading much more immersive, but one point that stand out like an beacon is not being about the sims. You could published this on a fanfic site under the label as original. On the comments you said is replica of another work of yours so why mixing the sims in it? Your writing skill is awesome and don't let anyone said it otherwise.