Fanon talk:A Sim's Tale: Book 2/@comment-27063251-20151017180902

Pardon me for pointing this out, but there are a few errors with Chapter 10's writing:

The first one is the word enthusiast; I think this should be enthusiastic

Second, two when Nina replies to Dina's call; a ? belongs to the name (Dina?), making the resulting d into a capital and then there's a missing 'm to the I.

Third, three when replying to Dina's question; make = makes, I = I'm, roamed = roaming

Other than that, pretty good story so far. Hoping Chris gets more involvement though.